Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Universities world
Suggestion
The university's world
University's world
over always want to maintain the balance between
number
Suggestion
the number
of female and male students, so that a healthy ratio between them is maintained.
Further
,
Accept space
,
some people do suggest that universities should accept equal number of
both
genders for all courses and subjects, but in my opinion admissions should be done on
merit
basis
rather than on
gender
Suggestion
a gender basis
basis
.
Presence
Suggestion
The presence
of
both
male and female students in a university is a must, so that apart from their studies,
both
genders are able to understand each other and learn to respect each others view point and sensitivities.
This
learning definitely helps these students to live better lives after their education is completed. Students who have studied with opposite genders in their universities are better prepared to work with them in their future
work places
a place where work is done
workplaces
.
Further
, to
mainatain
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
mention
Manhattan
this
equal balance between genders in universities, it is absolutely not necessary to reserve admissions on the
basis
of
student
gender
.
This
is not fair, as it will not be based on the
student
merit
and capabilities. In
such
a scenario a
student
having a higher
merit
will loose out on admission, to another
student
having lower
merit
, on the
basis
of
gender
. I am of the firm opinion that,
both
genders have equal capabilities, when it comes to qualifying for admissions in universities.
Therefore
, if we
alow
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
allow
allows
allowed
them to freely compete with each other for university admissions, they will qualify almost in equal numbers. There will be no requirement for reserving admissions on
gender
basis
and healthy ratio can be maintained between them on university campuses in
this
way.
Hence
, universities should not
controll
power to direct or determine
control
central
admissions on the
basis
of candidate
gender but
Accept comma addition
gender, but
let the candidate's
merit
and
capability decide
Suggestion
capability to decide
it.
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  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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