Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

Dear Mr.
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And
Mrs. Stone, I am writing in regards to your dissatisfaction from the loud noises coming from my apartment. I would like to start
by
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with
, sending my sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused, and request for forgiveness. On Monday, the 13th august 2008, I had hired an interior designer firm to redecorate and modernise my whole kitchen.
As a result
, there has been a lot of moving around the cupboards, unscrewing of cabinets, hammering, banging and drilling of walls.
Hence
, all the
echo
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echoes
and resonance that you have been experiencing.
However
, I understand that
this
situation is difficult and unacceptable.
Thus
, I would like to assure you that I have already instructed the personnel to tone down the noise, and work with more caution.
Moreover
, the work will be done after tomorrow. I hope
this
solution will please you. I am utterly regretful for the inconveniences caused, and hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me. Y
ours s
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Job and
incerely Sara Joband
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