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Some people believe that young people brig more profits to a company. Others says that older people actually bring more profit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Iveryone
Suggestion
Everyone
 does hold big dreams and to pursue that dream they are prepared to work day and night.
For instance
, the youth in their twenties is not well settled in their life, they dream of having luxurious cars, villas, mansions, and a
lot
 of investments and for that, they are willing to effort extremely hard.
Hence
, the efforts and high numbers of hours given by them in the business results in making it more lucrative.
Conversely
, the seniors in the company do hold the experience which is not inbuilt in the juniors. It happens many times that because of the employee prestige and goodwill in the market, makes the customers attract toward that business. To exemplify, it takes a while to gain customers' trust and, the employee must make
lot
Suggestion
lots
 more efforts to maintain the relationship with clients, and because of
this
 long term network with the client brings the earnings to the firm.
Moreover
, it undertakes an ample of time in the industry to build communication and networks with the people, and by doing that, one can make
business
Suggestion
a business
the business
 more appealing, and it requires a
lot
 of experience. But as per my standpoint,
this
 can be catered with the passage of time or by giving proper training to them; they will be well prepared to deal with customers. As per my perspective, today’s generation possesses a
lot
 of potentials. They are flexible, energetic and well accustomed with technology. In present time technology plays a major role in the company’s earnings as the advanced techs can make the working cost-effective. And it will be easily adopted by them, whereas it will be most challenging and time-consuming for older people because of their less cognitive power as compared to young. To conclude, young individuals have more capability and calibre to earn more for the firm because of their energy for persistent work, zeal, and adapts. While the elderly do contribute, but not as much as the youngster.
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