Human activities has had a negative effect on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

In recent years, many environmental issues
such
as climate change, loss of biodiversity and air pollution have occurred due to human activities. Some people believe that there is nothing can be done to solve these problems, while others think that human can effectively control the damage as long as we work together and implement the right measures. In my view, I think it is possible that people can eventually minimize the environmental problems. On the one hand, the scientific and technological progress in many ways
have improved
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has improved
the quality of human
life but
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life, but
at the same time it is
also
responsible for the extinction of
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
, deforestation, and the depletion of resources. In a fast growing world, many believe that the detrimental effects of human activities are basically irreversible and will get even worse because the demand for fuel and commercial woods are increasing at an unprecedented pace.
For example
, plants, animals and marine life are on the verge of distinction because human
take
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takes
their territory in order to build houses and dump
wastes
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waste
in the ocean
,
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,
and yet, there is still no effective approach to address these types of problems.
On the other hand
, many environmentalists advocate the importance of biodiversity and foresee the consequences of human activities, so in the
recently
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recent
years, it has been increasingly realized that human existence is in peril unless we do something to protect the earth.
Furthermore
, with the development of technologies, many companies have successfully invented cars
fueled
heated, driven, or produced by burning fuel
fuelled
by electricity
instead
of gas, which could
benefits
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benefit
the environment in the long run.
For example
, in China, shared bike
are
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is
ubiquitous
,
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,
which considerably reduce the emissions in vehicles, and
this
would hopefully minimize the damage of air pollution in big cities. To sum up, there is still a good chance that human will solve the
environment
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environmental
issues in the
future even
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future, even
though the damages of human activities on earth have done. Personally, I believe the world will gets better as long as people start to take appropriate measures to promote economic growth
instead
of destroying our mother nature.
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