• Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people can not expect enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. • Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Today, having
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for people to meet their needs is obvious.
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can be helpful and useful when provides
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satisfaction. I think when people enjoy their works, they become more successful and content financially and mentally. On the one hand, having work enjoyment makes possibilities for individuals to be more creative which can probably provide the better situations for them. These creations contribute to the economic growth of any country and
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provide many
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opportunities for other people. When employees do not enjoy their jobs gradually feel tired and bored these feelings harm their health mentally and lead to decrease the quality of their efficiency and ultimately harm the companies. So, governments and employers should provide conditions to motivate people and employees and create suitable opportunities for them to have their favourite jobs.
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, many consider that having permanent jobs, even with no expectation of pleasure is more important and enough for everyone. I believe that people need works and incomes to manage their needs, but having
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with no pleasure and enjoy not only will not be helpful but
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will make problems
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as depression and
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inefficiency.
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, when some teachers do not like their position and they work merely for incomes gradually they feel tired and monotonous these feelings can affect their mentality and their efficiency in their works which most likely to make students who are the futurists of any nation not be able to use the required knowledge with the highest level of teaching and prosperous from their teachers instruction it leads to the talents of the country will not flourish and
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can be a detriment for the future of the country. In conclusion, I believe that it is necessary for people to have jobs to manage their needs as well as having satisfaction and enjoy their jobs because these together can make individuals have a healthier and better lives and all these lead to make bright future in which people and their children live happily and satisfied from all Aspects of their lives.
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