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Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Fast
food
 industries have increased dramatically over the
last
 two decades, and marketing is deemed necessary for every business;
therefore
, advertisements are deployed. Some people are in favour of that and some against it,
however
, I believe fast foodstuff is not suitable for
health
 and should not be advertised. According to many people, it is imperative to advertise fast
food
 because they prefer to try every new menu daily. It could be due to their taste buds, which do not like homemade meal;
also
, to celebrate birthday parties or friends get together; their children prefer to eat snack like Mac chicken.
For example
, a survey report over 30% of children prefer to eat French fries
instead
 of homemade vegetable puree. Undoubtedly every business needs advertisements
such
 as fast
food
, but
this
 is not beneficial for well-being. Due to consuming fast
food
 regularly can bring many
health
 issues short term and long term
such
 as indigestion and heartburn is an immediate problem; obesity and its comorbidities are the long term problems. I agree with
this
 viewpoint and believe that to satisfy the taste buds; one should not put their
health
 at risk due to excessive fast
food
 consumption. In conclusion,
although
 the advertisement is necessary for promoting the fast-
food
 business, which makes people aware that they can explore more options for eating, they should not put their
health
 at risk.
Therefore I
Accept comma addition
Therefore, I
 believe it is imperative to ban fast
food
 promotion to protect ours and our children's
health
.
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