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Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In many countries,
Motor
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 cars are mainly used to cover a long distance quickly. Nowadays, Many people are using Cars and bikes to travel. But, many problems are caused while using
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motor ways
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motorways
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 essay will give some causing problem while using highways and roads.
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, Many accidents have occurred on the highways due to the high speed of vehicles. In some countries the speed limit of vehicles is high and due to that accident occurs.
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, the government should reduce the speed limit and mention the helpline number at every 10 km in the highways.
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, The accidents
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 may occur due to animals.
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, some highways are near to the forest, so many animals are passing the highway unknowingly and get hit from the vehicles which are with high speed. It causes a problem for animals and people both.
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, The people should have to reduce their speed whenever these highways came in their way.
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, Many robberies happened in the highways and service roads due to fewer lights on that road. Mainly robberies occur at night only. Many people were getting robbed mainly in the highways or main roads.
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, The government should put more lights and cameras to detect them easily and
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 it will reduce the chances of robberies at night. At final, various problem causes at the
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motorways
, but it is the easiest way to cover a long distance quickly. At conclude, There are various problems using
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motorways
 but yet it will necessary for us. Many people are aware of the causes and
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 reducing the causes of
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motorways
 by their
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owners
 and by that, it may reduce the causes of roads and highways.
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