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You are organising a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will reuire.

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Requirement for weed bank study:
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 emergence. During 24 months, thirteen flushes of seedling emergence were assessed. Check the Essay New Essay 1 Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more 0 Repeated words, meeting  I want double rooms with well heated system, no single rooms or dormitory type. One more thing i would like to say restrooms should be attachted with room and try clean the room before we arrive. I will tell share the dates with you as soon as we confimed it. Ilook forward to hear from you. Thanks and Regards, Apparen

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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