You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work. In your letter give details of the amount of time you need. In your letter suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

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Dear John, Hope to find you in good health! We missed

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one point post our

last

discussion of the annual performance meeting.

That is

for my upcoming leave plan for

year. I guess, most of the

times

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my leaves goes wasted due to my improper planning. Just like

last

summer when suddenly we both had to cancel holidays and work on client conference.

However

This

year I am planning

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and hopefully will be able to enjoy the full vacation period.

Also

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the other hand, I can not afford to miss

this

break as

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will be much awaited my best friend's destination wedding.

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I will be on a long vacation for fifteen days,

but

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let me assure you that all the work will be completed before my time off.

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, around five days will be spent on

wedding

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location and

rest

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of the day will be mostly travelling around beaches and hiking. One of the reasons for taking

this

break is the time I will get to recharge myself.

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, swimming on the beach will be

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relaxing activity for me. Even, if I will be travelling out of the country, but would be reachable by phone. My contact details have been mentioned below for your reference. In my

absence

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Molly can

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cover

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any client enquiry. To conclude, Request you consider my request as

priority

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as I have to book hotels and flight tickets

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. I would hope to get a positive response from you. Thanks and Regards Chetan

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

259 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
Time off, absence, leave of absence
Personal circumstances, compelling reason
Duration, number of days/weeks
Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
Preparation, advance work, assistance
Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
Inconvenience, minimal disruption
Request approval, formally request

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