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The information about shopping on the Internet sales between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand has changed a lot. Do you agree with this statement?

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The pie chart gives information about shopping on the Internet sales between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand. Overall, the percentage in
travel area
Suggestion
the travel area
 occupied the largest in 2003 but in 2013, film and music sector took the
first
 place. It is evident that in 2003, travel was the largest percentage, hold 36%, which fall to 29% in 2003. The purchase of people into books, film and music
was
Suggestion
were
 an upward trend: in 2003, books made up 19% and raised 3% after 10 years; especially film and music increased 12% during
10 years
Suggestion
the 10 years
, from 21% to 33%.
However
, the percentages of the online sales of the clothes decreased retail sectors decreased. In 2003, it occupied 24% and fell in a minority in 2013.
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