There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter •    describe what the problems are •    explain how these problems are affecting you •    suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear

Mr.

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Johnson, I am writing

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letter to bring to your attention

about

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my problem with the bus service. They are having some trouble, especially with its reliability. As you know, I am scheduled to be picked up by exactly 3:00 pm. But for the past few weeks, they have been arriving late due to

malfunction

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of the bus engines. All my tasked, related to work is greatly affected by

this

inconvenience. The promotion that I have been expecting

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coming month might be suspended or moved because of my tardiness which I do not want to happen. In order for

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not to happen again, I would like to suggest

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another bus that can accommodate my working schedule. If by any chance it occurs again, the company should refund my payment for the inconvenience that they have cost. Looking forward

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immediate

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response. Yours faithfully, Riah Mar Butalid