It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Some people argue that it is essential for children to learn moral values from an early age and
punishment
is the best way
to teach this
. This
essay totally agrees with that statement because parents’ and teachers’ roles are to guide children into
the right path. Suggestion
in
However
, parents should not beat their children and instead
, they can use other sorts of punishment
.
It is essential to use punishment
as one of the learning methods to show children the right path. This
is because youngsters will become spoilt if they can do whatever they want and still receive no punishment
when they make mistakes. Therefore
, parents and teachers should use this
way
to teach their children valuable lessons and morality. For example
, recent research by Oxford University revealed that adults who were punished during their childhood in the correct way
are more reliable and ethical compared to their peers because people’s character is built mainly during childhood.
Physical punishment
should no longer be used in the modern world. This
means that parents and teachers should always be careful about their way
of punishment
because certain punishment
that does not involve beating the children is useful. For example
, parents can take away a favorite
toy from a child or prevent them from watching TV. There are something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
also
some other constructive ways of punishments. For example
, nursery schools in Japan ask children to plant trees when they do something wrong. Such
punishments are beneficial for the children and the society. After all, the main purpose of the punishment
is to teach the child a lesson and not to hurt him physically.
In conclusion, it is vital for young people to learn how to distinguish between good and bad things and avoid doing mistakes and the most effective way
to achieve this
is to punish them; however
, this
punishment
should not be physical; rather it should be psychological and practical.Submitted by Yohanes Theda on
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