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there is information in UAE government spending in 2000. the total budget was AED 315 billion. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie chart illustrates the information on UAE
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 spending in 2000. Overall, social security has the highest figure and the transport has the lowest figure. As we can see, the UAE
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 spent more than 300
billion
 AED in total. Social security cost the highest
budget
 and it takes 100
billion
 AED. Health and personal social services required more than 53
billion
 was the
second
 largest
budget
 for the UAE
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 in 2000. UAE used 338
billion
 for education, 17
billion
 for law and order, more than 2 million with the
budget
 for industry, agriculture and employment.
In
Suggestion
On
 the other hand, the money for defence, other expenditure and debt interest were the same, about 23
billion
.
Finally
, the lowest
budget
 spent by UAE was transport, only 9
billion
.
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