In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

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are responsible to nurture the skills and abilities of the children. Children from Europe, especially 11 or 13 years of aged goes to
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in
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for them to enhance their practical skills related to
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application. But for some, they go to
school
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to learn general academic
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will discuss about the practical ways of the academic institutions to prepare the children for the
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of
work
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, teachers are
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of the most important people that can contribute to a child's
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and enhancement of skills. The schools and universities should consider hiring the best professional in
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for them to provide not only better quality
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a good set of values
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essential in the
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field. For an instance, a well accomplished teacher from my middle
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has greatly influenced me about how should I face fears and rejections especially when applying for my
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job
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. Being emotionally ready is
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of the greatest lesson that I have gained through her. Great teachers are
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the major influences in our
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, Students are being exposed to the real working
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through
internships
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. The management of the
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should provide best Schools and universities, Aside from our parents
,
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,
are responsible for the
nurturement
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of the skills and abilities of the children. Children from Europe, especially 11 or 13 years of aged goes to
school
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in
order
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for them to enhance their practical skills related to
job
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application. But for some, they go to
school
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to learn general academic
education
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.
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essay
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will discussed
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will discuss
about the practical ways of the academic institutions to prepare the children for the
world
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of
work
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.
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, teachers are
one
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of the most important
person
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people
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and enhancement of skills. The schools and universities should consider hiring the best professional in
order
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for them to provide not only better quality
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education but
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education, but
also
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good set
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a good set
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that is
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work field
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the work field
. For an instance,
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a well accomplished teacher
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from my middle
school
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has greatly
influence
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influenced
me about how should I face fears and rejections especially when applying for my
first
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job
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. Being emotionally ready is
one
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of the greatest lesson that I have gained through her. Great teachers are
one
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the major
influencers
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influences
in our
life
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.
Secondly
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, Students are being exposed to the real working
world
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through
internships
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. The management of the
school
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should provide
best set
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the best set
of companies that can help the children prepare for their
future
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work
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. Based on Harvard Research Department, 88% of the students learn
life
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practical skills, that they can use in their
future
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career
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, through their
internships
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.
Internships
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exposed the children about the real working
world
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the ways of the schools on providing ways to prepare the children for their
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working
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internships
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and skills that can help the children endure the problems that they might in their
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working environment.
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companies that can help the children prepare for their
future
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work
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. Based on Harvard Research Department, 88% of the students learn
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practical skills, that they can use in their
future
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career
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, through their
internships
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.
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exposed the children about the real working
world
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. To sum it up
this
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essay
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, It discussed the ways of the schools on providing ways to prepare the children for their
future
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working
career
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, including hiring the best professional and giving them the best set of companies for their
internships
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.
Although
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knowledge
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and skills that can help the children endure the problems that they might in their
future
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working environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vocational training programs
  • curriculum
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • communication skills
  • career guidance
  • counseling
  • internships
  • apprenticeships
  • local industries
  • businesses
  • digital literacy
  • technological skills
  • entrepreneurship
  • innovation
  • financial literacy
  • budgeting
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
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