You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group doesexplain why the group is good for the communitysuggest alternative days and times for practice

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Robertson I am writing

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letter to bring to your attention

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the said policy

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which inhibits us from using

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the community hall during Tuesdays and Fridays for rehearsals. We are humbly appealing for reconsideration in regard to the new statement. As you know, we are a group of musicians who plays for essential events in our residence

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as sports fest and other festivals that we annually celebrate. The music that we play

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necessary

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every occasion, it brings life and joy to the people. Festivals in our community would not be complete without the traditional music that only our band can play.

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, it gives the children to explore a new hobby or might discover their passion

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music by teaching them without any fee. I would like to suggest to your good office about reconsidering the scheduled date of our practice. My bandmates can adjust to the alternative dates that you would give to us. Hoping for your kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Riah

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