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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often claimed that
music
 is an effective means of uniting those of varying backgrounds and age ranges together. I agree with
this
 because citizens from different cultures often have musical interests in common and
music
 allows you to teach different kinds of
people
 about your country.
People
 from many different countries are fans of the same artists.
This
 allows
people
 to bond over their shared love of the same band or musical performer,
therefore
, they can get
along with
 one another despite differences in nationality or even different generations. In many cases,
people
 who would normally have difficulty getting along, have no problem becoming good friends because of their musical idols.
For example
,
people
 from all over the world are fans of K-Pop, and even nationalities who have
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historical differences,
such
 as South Korea, Japan and China, can happily enjoy the same concert. When you meet someone new, you can teach them about your culture through
music
. Every country in the world has a unique musical identity,
such
 as different genres, instruments, and songs;
thus
 providing the opportunity to teach a stranger about it. One of the most effective ways to become closer to someone is to improve their lives by teaching them something new and
music
 is often very interesting to
people
 no matter who they are or where they are from.
For example
, Ireland has traditional Gaelic
music
 and instruments,
such
 as the
boran
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barn
, and
people
 from all over the world visit there to learn about
this
 unique musical culture. In conclusion, I agree that
music
 can bring
people
 together because it cuts through differences
people
 might have through things we have in common and allows us to come closer by teaching one another about our unique musical heritage.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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