The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In our tremendously developing world, the
Internet
has become one of the essential aspects of our life. In recent years the
internet
has changed the whole world
signaficantly
in a statistically significant way
significantly
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and
now we can
bir
have
bear
imagine our life without it.
However
, there exist some individuals who concern about the addiction to the
Internet
has a negative effect on peopleʼs individuality, there will be a threat that all mankind may act identically in the future. But, I strongly disagree with
this
statement.
To begin
with, most individuals, especially children
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and a
teenegers
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teenager
teenagers
spend their leisure time on the
Internet
. They can watch movies and videos from
Youtube
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YouTube
,
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,
also
they may follow to famous
celebreties
a widely known person
celebrities
on social networks. Thatʼs why most parents are worried about the mental state and personality of their children. According to their view, if widespread use of the
internet
continues,
young generation
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the young generation
will stop thinking independently.
However
, these ideas are just thoughts of people who afraid of considerable reforms. It is obviously seen that we can
bir
have
bear
refuse the benefit of the
internet
usage. Nowadays, the
Internet
is one of the most common communication means. With the help of the
internet
we can keep in touch with our close people who live far away, as well as, we can make new friends, learn different cultures
anda
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
and a
various knowledges.
In addition
, the whole process of getting access to the information became easier. Now students do not need to go libraries thank to the
internet
,
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,
they have good chances to
learning
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learn
foreign languages and exchange ideas via social networks with their peers abroad. To
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conclude, there
are
more bright
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brighter
sides of
Internet
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the Internet
than its dark sides. As long as the
internet
help
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helps
us to keep
ip
spatially or metaphorically from a lower to a higher position
up
with the news
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and
aware of
variety
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varied
things, there is no danger that humanity will behave alike in the future
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