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The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#internet #lives #economies #world #village #everybody
In our tremendously developing world, the
Internet
 has become one of the essential aspects of our life. In recent years the
internet
 has changed the whole world
signaficantly
in a statistically significant way
significantly
anda
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
 now we can
bir
have
bear
 imagine our life without it.
However
, there exist some individuals who concern about the addiction to the
Internet
 has a negative effect on peopleʼs individuality, there will be a threat that all mankind may act identically in the future. But, I strongly disagree with
this
 statement.
To begin
 with, most individuals, especially children
anda
Suggestion
and a
teenegers
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teenager
teenagers
 spend their leisure time on the
Internet
. They can watch movies and videos from
Youtube
Suggestion
YouTube
,
Accept space
,
also
 they may follow to famous
celebreties
a widely known person
celebrities
 on social networks. Thatʼs why most parents are worried about the mental state and personality of their children. According to their view, if widespread use of the
internet
 continues,
young generation
Suggestion
the young generation
 will stop thinking independently.
However
, these ideas are just thoughts of people who afraid of considerable reforms. It is obviously seen that we can
bir
have
bear
 refuse the benefit of the
internet
 usage. Nowadays, the
Internet
 is one of the most common communication means. With the help of the
internet
 we can keep in touch with our close people who live far away, as well as, we can make new friends, learn different cultures
anda
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
and a
 various knowledges.
In addition
, the whole process of getting access to the information became easier. Now students do not need to go libraries thank to the
internet
,
Accept space
,
they have good chances to
learning
Suggestion
learn
 foreign languages and exchange ideas via social networks with their peers abroad. To
conclude there
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conclude, there
 are
more bright
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brighter
 sides of
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
 than its dark sides. As long as the
internet
help
Suggestion
helps
 us to keep
ip
spatially or metaphorically from a lower to a higher position
up
 with the news
anda
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
 aware of
variety
Suggestion
varied
 things, there is no danger that humanity will behave alike in the future
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