Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, world is changing a lot as compared to the past.This
is only possible because of the education and techonologies
. People have a negative thought regarding to the subject, which is related to the arts. I personally believe that every subject has its own importance. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
technology
However
, some people think that painting is not suppose
to be Suggestion
is not supposed
compelsary
in the school. They are saying required by rule
compulsory
this
thing because they are not aware of the importance of it. Even though every coin has two sides " one is positive while another is negative" and same perinclple
applies to the evey
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
suject
. But the positive the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
subject
effec t
of each course in a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
student's life
is much Suggestion
a student's life
more higher
than the negative result. Suggestion
higher
For example
, painting is very essential part of the writing and it is scientifically proven that. If children are good in
drawing Suggestion
at
then
they are excellent in writing naturally. Lectures on drawing are improving human's thinking capacity
and Suggestion
the human's thinking capacity
visuable
image. That's why every school must involve painting subject.
relating to or using sight
visual
Moreover
, drawing is more importent
for those students, who are trying to make their of great significance or value
important
fucture
as a painter. In 2009, one government report shows that, 75 percentage the time yet to come
future
enginer
and doctors who are a person who uses scientific knowledge to solve practical problems
engineers
engine
sucessful
in their life, they were good in painting at their schooling time. There are having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
numerious
advantages of drawing. That's why amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
government
must have Suggestion
the government
try
to engage everyone in Suggestion
tried
this
, by providing free classes on it and organising competition
on it.
To conclude, drawing is really beneficial for the every student and I Suggestion
a competition
the competition
am fully agree
with it, only because of the excellent outcomes. Suggestion
fully agree
have fully agreed
This
is good for the society as well as for the country.Submitted by rushipatel1953 on
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