You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter introduce yourself and ask for a loan say why you need the money explain how you plan to pay the money back You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am writing to
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request
you
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for
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a house
loan
. I am Inderpal,
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of Canada, working as a Software Developer in a
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. As far as
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concerned, I want to apply for a house
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, which I was planning to buy for
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2 years. In the end,
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and my husband thought to apply for a
home
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as it's been more than a year that we are collecting funds for our dream
home
.
Moreover
,we do not want to lose
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top of
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the middle of
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.
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the
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near
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the
home
. When it comes to payback, we both have
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the
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of our life like I will pay the
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and he will handle
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all other responsibilities of a
home
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In addition
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to return the full amount in the coming 2 years. Eventually, I would request you to please go through my request and do let us know that what are the possible solutions. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your's sincerely, Inderpal
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