Euthanasia, or mercy killing, has been in the news more and more recently. Many people are strongly against such a practice, but there is a growing demand to have it legalized. How far do you agree with euthanasia being legal?

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mercy killing and it has now become a hot topic of discussion. Even though several people are against
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a horrific method, there are few people who believe that
euthanasia
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I have to completely disagree with the given Idea since I find it to be an area where a lot of ethical issues exist. First and foremost, there is a strong chance of misuse of
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should be carried out if a person is in a critical place
due to
a severe disease and no other methods can be used to help them to bring back to normal life.
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severely burned is in a critical condition and no pain relievers or any other medications are found to be effective. But, in case of legalisation, it becomes a common practice among medical practitioners and any patient can be subjected to
such
practice for alternative motives without proper reasons.
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, in most cases the consent to perform
euthanasia
is not provided by the patients, usually, it's done by family members or relatives.
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brings up a serious issue regarding whether or not it's something that the patient
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.
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, in cases of dispute over inheritance from a seriously ill member of the family, relatives may acquire an illegal document that gives
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to carry out
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killing. In conclusion, only a small percentage of people support
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there are a lot of ethical issues with
euthanasia
of a person. And I strongly recommend a need to first sort out
such
problems before the legalisation of mercy killing.
Submitted by Mary on

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