Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this

Some people say that

school

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leavers should find a

work

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before they go

in

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to

a

university

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.

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will bring benefit

toward

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to

the graduated students, especially in their personal growth and skill qualification.

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,

work

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after leaving the

school

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can affect them in some negative ways. To be part and parcel,

work

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experience is one of the important

requirement

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requirements

that young people must to have. Having a

job

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after

graduate

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graduating

from

school

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will help them

their

people in general

they

mature and teaches them to live by their own. Taking

japan

a constitutional monarchy occupying the Japanese Archipelago; a world leader in electronics and automobile manufacture and ship building

Japan

as an example, where most of

students

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the students

there enroll

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there, enrol

there enrol

for a

job

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while they still in senior high

school

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and continue until they leave the

school

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and get

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into

a

university

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.

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, japan has a good quality of human resources.

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, most companies believe that

work

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experience is

important skill

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an important skill

that someone needs as his qualification when taking a

job

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. In fact, someone will have a better opportunity to be accepted in a

corporate

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corporation

if they have the related

work

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experience

toward

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to

the offered position.

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, young people who take a

job

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for a few years before

go

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going

to

university

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will face some problems.

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, too long being in a profession will reduce their desire to continue their desire to continue their study to

higher degree

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a higher degree

higher degrees

the higher degree

.

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cannot be called as positive, since young people still need to improve their knowledge which will support them to have another better

job

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for them.

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, for them who take a degree in

university

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after years leave the

school

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for

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to

work

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, have a bigger possibility to face some problems when they back

for

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to

learn. They tend to forget the basic knowledge which had been taught in

school

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, so they will find it more difficult to learn. In conclusion, it is justified to say that take a

job

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for a few years between

school

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and

university

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will create some lacks, as it would decrease young people's spirit to continue their study and make it harder for them to

back

cook and make edible by putting in a hot oven

bake

for learn after leave the

school

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for years. On the other side,

work

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skill is needed as an important qualification to

enroll

register formally as a participant or member

enrol

for a profession in a company and teach them to live by their own.