Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss bot views and give your opinion.

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considerably prevalent in the world. It is

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. It is highly agreeable that the criminal must be penalized corresponding

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commit

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jail. The noticeable problem is that the weight of

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argument that imprisoning is not effective. When it comes to

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that they are fairly useless to be

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of society. The purpose of

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is basically to reform

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which

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not

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on

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when it comes to the case of murder, the

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case could not return any of their ordinary life. Meanwhile, the criminal only

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penalty

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perspective the execution of

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criminal

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and

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or specific which is not correctly

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proper

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corresponding

penalty

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legislation rather than

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