On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what would you like them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,
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letter is to bring to your notice about the loss of my
iPad
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a few days back, and furnish details about the product, incident, and required actions to aid the official insurance procedures. During my latest visit to Jacksonville, Florida, my
Ipad
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was misplaced. The
iPad
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features a black back cover case with three scratches slightly to the right side of the front-facing camera.
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, my micro-magnetic
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ipad
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iPad
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pencil could not be found, which was placed inside my
racksack
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rucksack
. Not only my
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went missing, but
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my other electronic peripherals. When I was Surfing, Snorkeling, Yachting, I suspect that I would have misplaced the
IPad
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in the safety lockers.
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the electronics were placed carefully in a waterproof
racksack
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rucksack
, I don't think that I locked the safety lockers. As the sea adventure activities happened at different parts of the beach, I had to regularly shift my belongings between different lockers. In the end, I lost track of
my
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several items, which includes
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iPad
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the iPad
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. While going through
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ordeal, I found that my
iPad
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was insured,
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requesting
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a replacement
iPad
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. You could identify that the monthly insurance premium debits from my brother's account and maintains an impeccable record for the past few years.
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, the insurance premium falls under the top tier premium customer category. Along with the replacement, remote lock my lost
iPad
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(Model AX0908) per the safety regulations mentioned in the policy documents. Looking forward to
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back from you. Yours faithfully, Gandhi
Submitted by SUBBU GANDHI on

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable item
  • travel insurance
  • insurance manager
  • reimbursement
  • coverage policy
  • preventive measures
  • sentimental value
  • monetary value
  • swift resolution
  • reimbursement
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