Some young people believe it's best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

As a young person, attaining adulthood signifies the

begining

the event consisting of the start of something

beginning

of independence mostly because of the various cultural and moral lessons passed on by parents to their children while raising them. It connotes a period of responsibility and often at times

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responsibility is often

miscontrued

interpret in the wrong way

misconstrued

for individuality, which should not be the case. Using my growing up as a case study, attaining adulthood for me was

beyound

farther along in space or time or degree

beyond

the legal

defination

a concise explanation of the meaning of a word or phrase or symbol

definition

, it was the moment when

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believed and felt

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

could not only handle myself financially but

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emotionally,

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partially implies being able to fend for myself in entirety. The thing ism with

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mentality of mine, the only way of proving to myself means

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

have to move out beyond the controlling leach of my parents

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Accept space

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however not

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however, not

necessarily out of my hometown, but far enough to escape their watching eyes. Staying within the same home town is of

immence

unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope

immense

benefit as the young adult is kind of given a soft landing and doesn't have to feel or deal with the burden of starting afresh, which comes with

alot

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a lot

of baggage. Familiar faces

,

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,

known places

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Accept space

,

can

coming

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come

handy as

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stage is a milestone as well as an un-charted territory emotionally for the young adult. Leaving one's home town

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has also proven

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proven to be

quiet

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

beneficial to some young adults, especially for those that don't want to be seen and judged by the actions of their parents. Moving gives them an opportunity to start on

thier

of them or themselves

their

own terms and set

thier

of them or themselves

their

own

part

a course of conduct

path

, without fear of

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