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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help,so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#world #communities #countries
Vast majority people prefer that we not able to help every
people
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person
 which are
needs
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needing
 help in foreign countries.
However
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in our country some problems too.I completely disagree with
this
 statement
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if people
can to help
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can help
 someone they must help others as much as possible.
First
 and foremost
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it is ipso-facto that I think people should help others regardless of race and nationality.In recent years
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some people became to does not care about
environment
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the environment
 and ruthless.I believe that it is simple to give happiness to anyone if person want it,
such
 as,if people have money more than enough for own self they should give some financial assistance to needy and who has any conditions or opportunities they could buy new home to homeless,at least,everyone can buy food to hungry people for feed the stomach and it does not matter where they stand own country or foreign cities. At the present time
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I believe that most of people helps to others out of their
humanity
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human
 qualities and various states are extending a helping hand to each other.Due to COVID-19 in the world called on people to unite because half of society’s work has been suspended
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in consequence
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they
can not
can not
cannot
 earn money for
this
 reason they are receiving financial support from rich people.In favour of
communicate
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communicating
 countries each others organizations
helps
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help
 too
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for
example UNICEF
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example, UNICEF
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UNICOM and EUROPEAN UNION to the poorest countries of Africa and other states. In conclusion
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unfortunately
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it is true that
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we
can not
can not
cannot
 help everyone.
However
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people should not stop from giving helps others and they must be kind to everyone
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especially those people who need to help.
Submitted by EZOZA MAMUROVA on

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