People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

The table demonstrates the quantity of Ashdown

Museum

visitors during the

year

before and after it renovated while the chart illustrates the visitors survey result of their satisfaction with their

visit

to the

museum

by these two times. Overall, the amounts of people visited the

museum

rose significantly over the

year

of refurbishment and the very satisfied visitors were increased dramatically in the same

year

. In the

year

before the refurbishment, there were only 72000 people visited the

museum which

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museum, which

40% of them were dissatisfied with their

visit

and it took the biggest part of visitor views about the

museum

.

However

, after refurbishment, visitors were increased significantly to the 92000 of the total visitors to 35 % of them were very satisfied with their

visit

which increased from the initial percentages that were only 15%. Turning to the, the very dissatisfied visitors

were decrease

Suggestion

were decreasing

gradually from 10% to 5%.

In contrast

, the people who are satisfied with their

visit

increased from 30% to 40%. The

last

, the people who are not responding to the questionnaire survey remained constant in both

year

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years

at 5%.