Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statemen

Some people believe that tourists should accept social and
environmental
Suggestion
Environmental
responsibility
while others believe that tourists
should
Suggestion
Should
not accept any
responsibility
at all. To what extent
do
Suggestion
does
you
Suggestion
You
agree or disagree? There is no doubt in the given topic that few persons think that visitors should accept their duty regarding care of nature while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think that tourist should free from any kind of
responsibility
. I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that it is
everyone
Suggestion
everyone's
duty to keep our natural
habitate
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
in good condition. In the following paragraphs
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
intend to put forth my view regarding the positive argument to support my side. To
begine
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
begin
bargain
with,
tourisum
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
is the big work nowadays, people from worldwide visits
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
countries to see
haritage
practices that are handed down from the past by tradition
heritage
and culture of that
place but
Accept comma addition
place, but
if they
star
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
start
to harm that
habitate
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
, it should be not good for that place.
In
addition it
Accept comma addition
addition, it
is
duty
Suggestion
the duty
a duty
of every tourist they do not through any litter in
rever
a large natural stream of water (larger than a creek)
rivers
,
Accept space
,
pound and
lake
Suggestion
the lake
and do not pluck any kind of
floura
an act that fails
failure
flour a
flora
flour
from gardens where they visiting. To add more
in
Suggestion
to
it, in some places
resorces
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
are limited and demand is high because visitors
dont
do not
don't
bother about that they thought if they are paying
then
they can
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
fulfilled
their
requirement
Suggestion
requirements
in any cost.
for
Suggestion
For
instant, on high altitude they demand hot water for bath two to three times in a
day but
Accept comma addition
day, but
peoples have limited
resorces
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
there for that work because of low electric power
there they use
Suggestion
there, they use
dry wood for making food
,
Accept space
,
washing clothes
ect
.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
some time people of that area welcome to
visistors
someone who visits
visitors
acording
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
to
threr
of them or themselves
their
budght but
Accept comma addition
budget, but
budget but
this
is not good because every tourist are equal they
sepended
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depended
suspended
equal money to reach there so it is every one
responsibility
to give respect to all. In conclusion, It is
neccessory
absolutely essential
necessary
for every
tourits
someone who travels for pleasure
tourist
tourists
that they should respect and care of
floura
all the plant life in a particular region or period
flora
Gloria
floral
and
founa
all the animal life in a particular region or period
fauna
.
and
Suggestion
And
also
give respect to
culure
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
culture
of visiting
place
Suggestion
places
, another thing is that local peoples
also
treat well to all visitors with heart.
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