The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Due to recent
advancement
in communication technology, Suggestion
advances
mobile phone
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the mobile phone
have become
a part of our daily life. When compared to earlier years, People nowadays depend on mobile phones more than anything and it has become an important accessory. But, a lot of social and health related problems have Suggestion
has become
arised
due to over dependence. In my opinion the Negatives come into existence; take on form or shape
arisen
outwins
the positives.
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out wins
First
and foremost, is the increase in percentage
of road accidents. A large percentage of people use mobile phone when they are driving. Suggestion
the percentage
This
causes lose of concentration during driving also
and possibly leads to accidents that can be fatal to the driver. We humans are mostly programmed to perform one activity at a time so
, when we Accept comma addition
time, so
multitasks
our brain cannot focus on both functions that we are carrying out. Suggestion
multitask
For instance
, a survey conducted by road transportation authority indicated that, usage of phones while driving had contributed to large amount of road accidents in the cities of Kerala.
Secondly
, there is a huge increase in number
of persons getting addicted to mobile phones. A lot of youngsters had been reported to be admitted to various de-addiction centres for the treatment of mobile phones dependence. Over use of Suggestion
the number
phones especially
from Accept comma addition
phones, especially
young age
can result in aggressive behaviour, lack of concentration, lose of interest in studies and insomnia. Suggestion
a young age
For example
, the results of a health study conducted in
students of different age group in Delhi indicated that, over dependence on mobile devices has resulted in emergence of violent attitude in teenagers.
In conclusion, mobile phones are an important necessarily in our day to day life. Just like any available resources, mobile phones Suggestion
with
by
has
both advantages and disadvantages. And I believe, mobile phones won't Suggestion
have
have had
are having
created
any good impact in our society if we don't use it Suggestion
create
causously
.as if with kid gloves; with caution or prudence or tact
cautiously
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