You are unable to attend the farewell party for your manager at work. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: say why you can’t come tell them what you valued about working for him/her give him/her your best wishes.

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Dear Sir, Thank you for the invitation
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your farewell party,but I regret that I will not be able to attend. As it is my son's Birthday and we are celebrating it the same evening at home and have invited
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family for the event,many arrangements and coordination from my side are expected. It was a wonderful experience to work with you all these years and got to learn many things from you as well. You inspired me to take up new challenges throughout my career which has helped me to grow in an organisation for which I cannot thank you enough. I wish you all the very best for your retirement life which I am sure you are going to enjoy with your family and friends and pursue your childhood dreams. Stay in touch and take care. Your's faithfully, Anitha Rukmini.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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