Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends. Other people prefer to be alone most of the time. Which way of life do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Most people spend their free hours with their friends, while many sit alone.
Although
, both the ways have merits of their own, I do prefer a balance between both of these ways as, one gives us time for introspection, while the other helps us to kill loneliness. Some of the most precious memories of our life are with our friends. It is said that all the other relations get attached with our birth, but friendship is only one, which we develop by ourselves and
thus
, good friends play a very significant role in our lives. A good comrade
always guides
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has always guided
us towards the right path and motivates us to follow it until, we achieve success.
In addition
to
this
, they are like salt to a person's life, by adding moments fun.
Hence
, they help us forget the all the worries, stress and workload and enjoy.
On the other hand
, it is equally important to sit alone. Everyone needs to spend some time to introspect his/her actions. As, by spending some moments with friends gives a short period peace, introspection helps us to find some permanent solutions
of
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to
our problems.
Also
, it increases our concentration power and makes us mentally strong. Even so, socialising is equally necessary, a person who always stays indoors and never talks becomes introvert and creates a negative effect on
brain
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the brain
.
For example
, a very famous Nobel price winner Pabelo Nerunda, in one of his poems, has conveyed the importance of reviewing our own deeds. To conclude, not the single method is efficient, but to live a balanced and stress free
life it
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life, it
is necessary to use both of these methods in equal proportion.
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