The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend
The unprecedented convenience of travelling are gaining popularity due to the dramatic fall in the flight fare in the
last
10 years. In this
essay, the increase in tourism will be discussed as the central advantage and the problem arises out of tourism as one of the disadvantages.
In conclusion, ever since the price of the air flights has dropped drastically, visiting other geographical zones have made easy. As a result
, foreign visitors have greatly contributed to the economy of the country, however
, it is at the expense of littering the environment.Submitted by JJ wong on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite