Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Juvenile should watch television more often, to be at an educational institution or at their apartment since they are able to learn productively from it. I wholeheartedly concur with
this
statement. The reasons are twofold, firstly
, they can gain new insights that cannot be learned from the textbook and secondly
, it will help them in relation to their linguistic abilities.
In conclusion, watching shows can be immeasurably beneficial to the youth as they are able to build new knowledge that are not covered in the classroom and improve their language skills at the same time. However
, it should not be at the expense of their studies.Submitted by JJ wong on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite