International air fares are falling and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity?

In previous years the
tourism
industry has
sky rocketed
propels bright light high in the sky, or used to propel a lifesaving line or harpoon
skyrocketed
, due to decrease in the cost of air tickets. The millions of tourists left a considerable amount of money in visited countries, which created a new
workplaces
Suggestion
workplace
and improved finances of residents. In other hand
,
Accept space
,
uncontrolled
tourism
destroys natural habitat of wild animals, pollute environment and make
stress
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the stress
on residents.
To begin
with, according to forecast the
tourism
industry is estimated to contribute the highest proportion of income
,
Accept space
,
and surpasses oil industry. It is clear that, many countries are receiving a considerable amount of profit from the
tourism
industryindustry
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industry
industry industry
, which spent on development of facilities and to social obligations.
For instance
, in Turkey thousands of hotels and restaurants are built to satisfy the desire of visitors, which
also
employ local people.
Moreover
, tourists will promote the host state, by spreading information to his surrounding, which eventually will affect in increase of investments amount or popularity of the country among the world.
Secondly
, in the process of communication both sides exchange different ideas, get to know about cultural features and become more tolerate about the traits of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
culture.
However
, the visitors usually are not concerned about the future attractions. The
rubish
worthless material that is to be disposed of
rubbish
rubies
rabbis
and polluted eco-system is just a top of the iceberg, whereas some cases include vandalism, cultural disrespect to the tradition and culture of a resident. To conclude, it is important to
conctantly
without variation or change, in every case
constantly
monitor attractions and
visiors
someone who visits
visitors
to elaborate conflict and crime. Despite of a
risks
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risk
, the
tourism
is
enourmous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
segment of
economy
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the economy
, which brings significant benefits to both sides, in case of proper attitude.
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