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Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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A lot of seniors are put in
care
 or nursing homes by their families because they don’t have enough time to take
care
 of them. In
this
 essay I will try to discuss
this
 problem. Those families who have to take
care
 of seniors are having difficulties with it because most of their family members are at work. But how can they take
care
 of them so it is more comfortable for them and can be an effective means. If they are in there, they can be safe and can be healthy because in nursing homes they provide healthy foods which are balanced for elders on time. There are many elders so they can be close to each other and have fun with them. If they are put into the
sanatorium they
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sanatorium, they
 feel sad because they are human same as us and have feelings. They can suffer from severe depressions if they are put in the caring house. Most seniors who have dementia are being put into the caring house.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Professional care
  • Medical attention
  • Trained staff
  • Social interaction
  • Combat loneliness
  • Safety and security
  • Relief for families
  • Loss of autonomy
  • Emotional impact
  • Cost
  • Financial strain
  • Quality of care
  • Neglect and abuse
  • Detachment from family
  • Mental wellbeing
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