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SOME PEOPLE THINK GOVERNMENT SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON MEASURES TO SAVE LANGUAGES WITH FEW SPEAKERS FROM DYING OUT COMPLETELY. OTHERS THINK THIS IS A WASTE OF FINANCIAL RESOURCES. DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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In the
last
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 decade, the human race is influenced highly by the revolution of technology, specifically the ancient tradition and culture. In
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 conditions, many individuals pursue a notion that to spare money to shield in linguistic activities is worthless, whereas others think in a reverse manner and believe that the ruling body should devote some money to secure typical languages with the speakers. In
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 essay both the aspects are elucidated with my followed opinion. There are several reasons to not waste country’s currency to save the culture.
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, the other
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 money despite
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 unused dialects. If any language become obsolete, the predominant factor for
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 its less utilization among the citizens.
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, to protect
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 speakers, which will be useless after the speaker die in the future.
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, frequent use and highly acceptability endorse the longevity of anything. When any jargons do not speak in person, it means its not accepted by the community. So, to allocate some revenues on languages, which do not widely acceptances, is becoming worthless.
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, there are numerous possible factors which require the attention of the government to secure the distinct speech and the foremost one is their significance to understand classic books. In simple word, The
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sanskrit
(Hinduism) an ancient language of India (the language of the Vedas and of Hinduism); an official language of India although it is now used only for religious purposes
Sanskrit
, which is not widely spoken by communities, but it's quintessential to learn our ancient literatures, which is only available in the
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sanskrit
(Hinduism) an ancient language of India (the language of the Vedas and of Hinduism); an official language of India although it is now used only for religious purposes
Sanskrit
.
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, It's called the mother of other languages. It is substantiated that the language written in the epic book Rugved, I.e.
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sanskrit
(Hinduism) an ancient language of India (the language of the Vedas and of Hinduism); an official language of India although it is now used only for religious purposes
Sanskrit
, is the mother of all languages. And, to bolster the
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sanskrit
(Hinduism) an ancient language of India (the language of the Vedas and of Hinduism); an official language of India although it is now used only for religious purposes
Sanskrit
 speakers, government has to take some proactive avenues to secure not only languages but speakers as well. Agglomerating above all the stances, it can be said that
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, some languages are un-utilized and un-accepted by
community
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the community
, in my opinion, the predominance of classic languages to learn our ancient cultures and literatures, they should be protected by the government by encouraging youths and sparing currency notes for it.
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