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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a popular statement that the main factor of every
job
 is concluded about money. The higher the salary, the better the
job
. I have to disagree with
this
 opinion because money is not the key of all of your problems. In
this
 essay I would like to explain why I disagree.
To begin
 with, we spend a lot of time at work, it is
significant part
Suggestion
a significant part
 of our life. We need to enjoy the process. Every
job
 must be quite attractive for every employee in order to be motivated and to have stimulus for development. Unpleasant
job
 is very harmful for people, no matter what salary. It can destroy the mind of
human
Suggestion
humanity
, evolve different psychological diseases, which can be chronic.
Moreover
, you cannot make a career if you think about money. The most important aim must be the idea, consisting of various aspects. It can be your personal achievements or the development of your company. If you are a great specialist or your company is leading in the certain field, your income will eventually high anyway.
Nevertheless
, some people are sure that their income can get rid of
problem
Suggestion
the problem
a problem
problems
, which are
solved
rescued; especially from the power and consequences of sin
saved
 in cash. I partly agree with
this
 opinion, but these problems
are connected usually
Suggestion
are usually connected
 with material goods,
such
 as
house
Suggestion
houses
a house
 or cars. You will not be satisfied, if your mind is polluted by work which you hate. To sum up, I strongly believe that we do not have to think about high income
firstly
. Money can solve a lot of problems, but they cannot make our life happier and more satisfied.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial security
  • job satisfaction
  • long-term happiness
  • personal fulfillment
  • financial stability
  • passion
  • quality of life
  • work-life balance
  • career advancement
  • societal impact
  • income disparity
  • material success
  • monetary compensation
  • wealth accumulation
  • economic well-being
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