As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation?

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Now-a-days, technology has been increased so powerfully that we can do many things at a short time and

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do not need numerous people. But, due to advanced technology, people actually lose their

job

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. Computers,

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, do not equal to human. They make

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also mistakes

in their

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. So, even

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computer

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the computer

is responsible for depriving

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of human, still there are some limitations on excessive use of computers.

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of all, We know that some jobs do not exist because of the invention of computers.

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, bank cashier, who do check-in or checkout, or lost due to installed ATM booth. People can check their accounts, receive money, transfer money without helping of bank cashier.

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, using online bank account system, people do not need to go outside. They can enjoy all services even they stay at home. Another task is lost

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receptions and helper of library because all things are computerized. People can check all information about book in

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computer

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the computer

, it is not necessary more people keep all records in notebook by writing. Even

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computer

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the computer

is replaced by human,

computer

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are not equal to human. They have

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limitations when everything is computerized.

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, Due to ATM both, we feel that it makes our life easy. But it cannot work if your credit card is stolen.

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Computer

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The computer

A computer

cannot automatically renew your information. In

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case, you have to need human's help.

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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation?

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