The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.

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Governments, environmentalists and large organisations, in many countries, are trying to curb environmental problems, and a part of
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effort is to make aware people about how they can contribute to environmental issues. It is surprising how our dietary habits or the dresses we wear can all contribute to the environmental problems and
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why without involving ordinary citizens, government bodies and private organisations can not reverse the downward fall when it comes to the environment.
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with, our environment is becoming worse with every passing day and without awareness among ordinary citizens, it will become impossible to achieve environmental protection. We, as ordinary citizens, are constantly contributing to global warming, pollution and climate change. The car we drive exhaust carbon dioxide, the dresses we wear require a huge amount of fibres and water, the plastic bags we
use
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end up in the water, and even the diets we follow can increase the possibility of climate change.
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, if people are not made cognizant of their actions that are directly or indirectly responsible for global warming, they will not fully comprehend the gravity of the intricacies and feel responsible. Climate change is so large a problem that only governments and large organizations can not work to find a solution for that and a coordinated effort is required. It is undeniable that countries have taken serious steps to curb environmental problems and our leaders are meeting frequently to discuss it. Restrictions are in place on
gas emissions
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gas, emissions
,
fossils
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fossil
fuel
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, plastic production and
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, and alternative sources of green energy are being invested upon. But if the efforts are not made at an individual level, the magnitude of damage and pollutions would far outstrip the efforts.
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, scientists, engineers, environmentalists and authority may come out with proposal and invest money in research, but they
can not
can not
cannot
control the amount of plastic bags we
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and throw away without recycling. Every environmental problem is related to our human lifestyle and unconsciousness and its high time to include
syllabus
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a syllabus
about environmental protection in our school. We have got only one planet to live in and we must save it.
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