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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. We can learn from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#travel #places #cultures #books #films #internet
It
is consider
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is considered
 that
travel
 to other places or country to learn about other
cultural
Suggestion
cultures
 is not necessary. Some people believe that we can learn from
books films
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books, films
 and internet
.
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.
but
Suggestion
But
travel
 and observation will help us to feel realistic
instead
 of
learn
Suggestion
learning
 books films or internet
.
Accept space
.
this
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This
essey
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
 will discuss about the topic that We should
travel
 to learn about all the cultures. On the other hands we just imagine through learn from
books films
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books, films
 and
internet but
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the internet, but
the internet but
 we don't know
it
it is
it's
 true or not. Learning from
books films
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books, films
 that we can have
informations photos
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information, photos
information photos
 about that
cultures
Suggestion
culture
.
however it
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However, it
However it
 was written by someone who has experienced it before
.
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.
So the
informations photos
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information, photos
information photos
 old that may be changed. We cannot touch or learn from people who live in that
cultures
Suggestion
culture
.
also we
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Also, we
Also we
 cannot
observation
Suggestion
observe
 because we don't
travel
 there to study and experience. One the other hands, the
travel
 to other places to learn will help us to compare with reality and information or imagine. We have
knowlegh
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
 through looking and researching from the Places in which have cultures We want learn
.
Accept space
.
 Beside that, we can see the reality in that country.
For example
 the
Egypt
Suggestion
Egyptian
 pyramid which natural famous with Giza and special culture. When we
travel
 there we learn about languages
,
Accept space
,
participate the party or holidays
.
Accept space
.
We can see and touch about the Great Pyramid of Giza- it is the oldest of Seven Wonders of the
Accient
belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire
Ancient
 World.
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To conclude, I
However
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any of various alternatives; some other
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d the entertainment or Transport Conclude, I disagree that the
travel
 to learn about other culture is not necessary
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