In most countries disable people are not catered adequately, e.g. buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charities and voluntary organizations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be taken to assist disable people? Discuss,

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It is clearly that countries need the policies and
people
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the people
who running it to keep nation
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develops
. So,
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it is
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hard to keep eyes on people with disabilities because of they do not create so much profit or reputation
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of
their country. To my way of thinking, look after disable people is apart from raising humanity in social life and
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the contribution
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and residential. There are two main reasons which lead to unfortunate citizen lack of
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the whole picture of countries, it is not difficult to realize that economy always in the
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top priority and citizen are important factor make it grows and expands. Obviously, incapacitate-working people cannot receive or ask for many benefits base
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for
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reason is about charity organizations,
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less, but
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affect
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makes organizations hard to appropriate donations of many people. These problems that I mention above have already had solutions which are
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needed
assistances form
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a lot.
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,
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government
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the government
increases taxes to get more money and use that money creates some policies for
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disabled
people and build some places suitable for take care them.
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, an organization which
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operates
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control with
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authority to receive
donations from different sources and helping unfortunate people.
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association is
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public news or information about people are in
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difficult situations
a difficult situation
and guaranteed they will be received helps. Apart from that, the
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necessity
of both solutions is how to find people with
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a suitable spirit
because
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the best
solution in a wrong hand can be turned into problems. In conclusion, look after people who cannot afford their life is a duty of each individual and
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will make sure
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responsibility done by policies to make
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society become better.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adequately cater
  • inappropriately designed
  • stricter building regulations
  • accessible
  • ramps
  • elevators
  • tactile guidance paths
  • allocated
  • disability services
  • tax incentives
  • public awareness campaigns
  • rights and capabilities
  • reduce stigma
  • promote inclusivity
  • robust policies
  • equal access
  • government body
  • overseeing
  • accessibility standards
  • assistive technologies
  • subsidizing
  • communication devices
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