Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes. Should these new home be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside?

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As we all know
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number
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the number
a number
of population rapidly increased in most of countries and it required more homes.
many
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Many
people prefer to live in countryside while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
like to live in existing cities. According to me homes should be constructed in existing cities.
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with, both countryside and existing cities are
good place
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a good place
good places
to live
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As I prefer existing cities the reasons behind that its already a
develoed
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
area. There are more facilities around
living place
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living places
the living place
such
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as grocery stores
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gym
so on
in the near future
soon
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Moreover its
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Moreover, its
well established
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There are good transport facilities. Within it one can easily adjust in that kind of environment. On the other side, in countryside one need to start from zero.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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