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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extend do you agree?

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The graph compares the visitors to the Caribbean Island in the
year
 2010 to 2016. Overall, each
year
, the total tourists of the Caribbean Island experienced an upward trend and jump considerably by the end of the period. Every
year
, the visitors who decided to stay on cruise ships grew steadily with a small fluctuation in the early period.
Initially
, the visitors who staying on the cruise ship are lower than the visitors that stayed on the island which only around twenty fifth-tenth
million
 people and rose to half a
million
 people in the following
year
. In 2012, these visitors decreased in
number
 by almost a half from the
number
 of visitors a
year
 before, which is the
year
 2011.
However
, the
number
 of visitors who stay on the cruise ship increased steadily each
year
 and reaches the highest
number
 of visitors at 2
million
 people and
outracing
the pursuit (of a person or animal) by following tracks or marks they left behind
tracking
attracting
 the
number
 of visitors who stay on the island by the end of the period. Turning to, the amounts of the tourist who decided to stay on the Island, in the beginning, is about 0.75
million
 people and have no noticeable change in the following
year
.
However
, it grew steadily in the
next
 two years and reached the
number
 around 1.25 billion and 1.5 billion, which keep stable with no change until 2015.
However
, in 2016, the
number
 of visitors that stayed on the island decrease for almost 1
million
 and made up back to 1.5
million
 at the end of the time frame.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global connectivity
  • digital banking
  • cybersecurity
  • data protection
  • security breaches
  • cyber attacks
  • online transactions
  • digital divide
  • surveillance
  • freedom of information
  • responsible usage
  • ethical considerations
  • digital footprints
  • online behavior
  • information inequality
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