In most countries, disabled people are not catered for adequately, e.g. buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charities and voluntary organizations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be taken to assist disabled people?

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It’s undoubtedly the case that people with disabilities are not adequately catered in many countries. There are several pieces of evidence for
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problem, and various measured could be taken by governments and individuals to improve the situation.
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, there are lots of priority granted to physically disabled people by the government: give medical support, scholarships in education, and so on. But still, there’re a variety of different factors have led to the problem unfulfilled. The most obvious one might be the inappropriate design of buildings for handicapped people. Wheelchair users find
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difficulty
with stairs, yet ramps are not taken seriously in
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most office
and residential buildings, or not a lot of places create a wider parking space reserved for disabled drivers. Charities and voluntary organizations offer a great deal of
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support, but
the governments are relying heavily on their assistance and funding make it difficult to fulfil their financial needs. Despite some obvious reasons described above, there are several actions that governments could take to help solve the problems.
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, a spot on the solution would always keep disabled people in mind in designing buildings, public and privately owned. The
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measure would be for governments to reduce taxes and increase job opportunities for people with difficulties.
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, It’s very important to encourage them to share more about their difficulties since a disabled person can express problems suffered by him or her in a better way,
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information collected would help the governments improved the solutions effectively. In conclusion, despite some obvious reasons, various measures can be taken to tackle the problem of adequately catering for disabled people.
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maybe not optimal
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it can help them more dependent and useful for society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adequately cater
  • inappropriately designed
  • stricter building regulations
  • accessible
  • ramps
  • elevators
  • tactile guidance paths
  • allocated
  • disability services
  • tax incentives
  • public awareness campaigns
  • rights and capabilities
  • reduce stigma
  • promote inclusivity
  • robust policies
  • equal access
  • government body
  • overseeing
  • accessibility standards
  • assistive technologies
  • subsidizing
  • communication devices
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