some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing

The twenty-one century is the century of modern technology and the new
change
.
the
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The
worl
everything that exists anywhere
world
become
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has become
becomes
is becoming
improvement so
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improvement, so
humans have to
change
themselves to adapt to
life
. But there are some people who don't want to
change
,
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,
they want to do the
samething
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same thing
and avoid
change
and the others thinks changing to adapt to
life
is
good thing
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a good thing
because doing the same thing everyday is boring and
change
's in one
life
bring a lot of benefits There are some people who always want to do the same job, live in the same
houseor
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house or
even read one book only in their
life
. So that their
life
will become boring.I do not feel
well
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good
about it. I think
spend
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spending
one day
to do
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doing
same thing
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the same thing
make
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makes
us like a robot-do the
samething
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same thing
that
preprogramed
. We just
waisting
any general reduction in vitality and strength of body and mind resulting from a debilitating chronic disease
wasting
our time and learn nothing.
However
,
changes
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the changes
make the
life
become more interesting, more challenging and human can adapt to
life
quickly. We can
change
with the
sociaty
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
to learn news and know more information that had just found.
Change
makes people more self-confident, more patient and more successful. I believe that people who succeed in
life
change
have great and delightful
life
. To sum up, I am sure that changing is necessary for people around the
worl
everything that exists anywhere
world
. So people who enjoy
change
are the engine of human development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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