In many countries,children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Most of the children in the world are suffering from overweight and they are becoming unhealthier. Some people think that the
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has to take measures to overcome
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problem. I agree with
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to prevent
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situation regarding the fitness of children.
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Firstly many
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Firstly, many
countries like Germany, England
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Brazil are affected by
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problem. These countries produce more number of food and drink products which are having high sugar and fat levels. These are the main reasons for early gaining of the weight in the children as well as it leads to get many well-being complications. Not only food habits, but
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doing exercise is a key to improve the strength. To handle
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type of situation the
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has to take proper guidelines in the production of feed items and drinking products. Fat and sugar levels in food items are to be low. There should be a daily sport or an exercise class in every school which leads to improve the health. The
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should ban the products that are not into the rules.Not only the ministry, but
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parents should take the responsibility to look after the children which makes them to become healthier. I conclude that the parents' involvement is the main way to improve the health of Children and the
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schemes like mid day nutritious Food service will help to poor children to maintain their health.
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