whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck
It is argued that lucky is the key to some people’s
success
. As success
is only attributed by hard work
and determination
, I completely disagree with this
opinion.
If success
was free, everyone would have it. In fact, there are few successful individuals because each of them is determined and industrious. The harder people work
on their dream, the more confident they become. Those who lack self-esteem also lack
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also lacking
determination
and end up losing hope and giving up, as a result
they are the failure. For instance
, Thomas Edison, one of the greatest inventors in the 20th century ,
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experiments with the filament until the finest light bulb was produced. His Suggestion
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success
is made by his hard work
, rather than luck
. Another clear case of success
through determination
is Nguyen Ngoc Ky ,
a disabled manAccept space
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He could not write by hand; Accept space
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however
, with his determination
and hard word ,
he is able to write by his foot and became a successful teacher.
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By contrast
, luck
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doesn't play
achivement
. the action of accomplishing something
achievement
achievements
Luck
is just a state of mind, so if people are dependent on luck
they could never be successful.For instance
, a student who does not study for an exam ,
might fail. Accept space
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Moreover
, it is clear that a person who wins a lottery ,
might soon lose all of his or her money as it does not require anything to achieve.
In conclusion, for all reasons I have mentioned above, I believe that to become a successful person at the end of the day, people must be hardworking and determined to Accept space
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