You were unhappy about a meal in a restaurant. write a letter to the manager, tell him why you chose his restaurant, explain why you were not happy about the service and tell him what to do.

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Medawar, Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Miriam Helou, a regular customer at your esteemed restaurant for the past 10 years. I am

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fond of your healthy and delicious platters and I always make sure to eat at least once a week at your place. My

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visit was on June 20th and it was my husband's birthday celebration. I am really disappointed at the service received due to the Rudeness of the newly recruited waiter, platters took too long to be served and the waiter forgot to serve the gift I gave him with the cake. I would really love to hear that a warning will be addressed to her, noting that she ruined

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special evening.

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, I don’t want to lose sharing your restaurant’s experience with my loved ones. Thank you in advance for your understanding and waiting for your reply. Best regards, Miriam Helou

Submitted by Miriam Medawar on Fri Jun 26 2020

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