Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

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Nowadays, with the economic evolution entertainment field has become one of the most paid fields. Indeed, some people believe that less money must be paid to the entertainers. From my point of view, I totally agree that famous entertainers are gaining undeserved wealth.
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of all, too much cash is being spent on inappropriate activities. In many countries, wealth is lost on entertainment while people are starving.
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, In Brazil, football players receive a higher salary, which reaches millions, whereas the country is facing educational, financial and medical problems.
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, newspapers have shown many cases that film stars, pop musicians or sports stars have a problem with paying their taxes.
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, entertainers take much wage, fame, and people’s love, but they do not return anything back.
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, surging entertainers’ salary can assign the entertainers as a role model in the community. The new generation will have
misunderstanding
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about the real role model. Teenagers may assimilate that being in the entertainment field is the most
honorable
not disposed to cheat or defraud; not deceptive or fraudulent
honourable
thing to accomplish.
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not true at all. In every civilization, doctors, engineers, teachers, scholars and soldiers deserve to be paid much money than others. These people who build the country by saving people's lives, providing infrastructure, teaching the children, searching for solutions and protecting the country from the enemy. To conclude, I believe that entertainers’ wage concept has to be rejuvenated. Less money should be allocated to them. Many financial issues can be mitigated if everyone takes what he truly deserves. Money should be given to people who are improving and developing the county.
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  • Revenue generation
  • Supply and demand
  • Influence on culture
  • Trendsetters
  • Income disparity
  • Essential workers
  • Critical role
  • Public health
  • Endorsements
  • Economies
  • Compensation
  • Significant contribution
  • Technological advancements
  • Global challenges
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