Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of modren working world.

It is undeniable that education has become an indispensable weapon in order for students to keep up with the fast pace of changes associating with technology for the

last

few decades. Presently, schools as well as institutions put too much emphasis on the old conventional subjects, which

are not adequately prepare

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are not adequately preparing

have not adequately prepared

students for realistic demands of

modern working world

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the modern working world

. I completely agree with

this

phenomenon and here are some of my viewpoints will be discussed in

this

essay to address

this

given statement. It is widely acknowledged that students are likely to have

different life

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a different life

and discrepant

knowledge

or experience.

However

, traditional

subjects providing

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subjects, providing

students educational foundation to apply in some certain situations. Take literature in Vietnam as an example, students are bound to be forced to meet

teacher’s requirements

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the teacher’s requirements

scale and follow

outdated curriculum

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an outdated curriculum

published

for

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in

from

long time

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a long time

ago so they may gain

unvaluable

having incalculable monetary, intellectual, or spiritual worth

invaluable

knowledge

for their future career. It is advisable that education should go

further

than it currently does. Not only does it well prepare for student’s

knowledge

,

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,

but

also

optimizie

make optimal; get the most out of; use best

optimize

optimise

optimized

their own personal thinking in lieu of focusing excessively on learning basic thesis.

Secondly

, traditional curriculum should be publicized at all

schools but

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schools, but

need to be less academic-based subjects and optional. Changing the way to reach core

knowledge

foundation and educational lessons by learning via internet or technological platforms for several up-to-date subjects

such

as time

managment

the act of managing something

management

skills, collaborating skills and so on.

Thus

,

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,

students will be more independent and confident for realistic demands of

modern working world

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the modern working world

. In conclusion, well-balanced

knowledge

base in schools should be put into consideration as a top

prority

status established in order of importance or urgency

priority

with the aim to prepare students for careers far more significant than concentrating on traditional subjects.