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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institution. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 competent world, to be successive people need to have some skills and qualities rather than academic teachings to achieve goal. I personally believe
with
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in
this
 statement. In colleges they teach how to solve problems with formulas and some question and answers
relevent
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
irrelevant
 to some topics
,
Accept space
,
 which helps to get
job
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jobs
 rather than that
their
in or at that place
there
 is something called ability to do which probably not a subject of universities. The formulas taught in universities
to
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To
 solve will not be useful in the future and may be forgetful. Human beings need to be competent to be on top of success.
Their
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There
 is some skill and tactic need to be used in work or business.
For instance
 a chef or a mechanic who started to work in a hotel or a
garrage
an outbuilding (or part of a building) for housing automobiles
garage
 after high school may be better than a hotel
managment
the act of managing something
management
 student or
a
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an
automobile
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automotive
 student
at
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on
 their work due to their
nack
a special way of doing something
knack
neck
necks
 and skill which is not taught at colleges or schools
.
Accept space
.
Although
 university education is required to
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
job requirements
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the job requirements
 to be successful. I believe ability and skill and earned and succeeded by their own and not taught in universities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • practical skills
  • emotional intelligence
  • self-awareness
  • empathy
  • interpersonal skills
  • networking
  • creativity
  • adaptability
  • real-world experiences
  • internships
  • mentorships
  • hands-on projects
  • foundational knowledge
  • critical thinking skills
  • academic learning
  • traditional curricula
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